Talk:Heroes: The story of Harlow and Annora/@comment-39615662-20191211045616

this story is really well-written, i love the fluency of it all (it's pretty hard to maintain that kind of consistency, especially with a collab!) and the art is stunning and adds a ton of livelihood to help give a clear visualization of what is happening. the pacing is on fleek, but the only thing i suggest it that you try using more sensory details, to make the scenes really come alive. other than that, i love it! i haven't read ALL the way up until chapter 17, as i'm running low on time, but i'm guessing it's just as good if not better than the previous chapters.