Talk:Burrow/@comment-37729082-20200213032614

Hey, I'm sort of a rulebreaker when it comes to reviews so I hope you grab your popcorn.

''' I know you said not to adress cliches, and that's important for this review because I'm not stating it in the way you think I am and this will include my honest opinion. '''

  We're starting with the bad things first and moving up to the part that really needs addressing slowly.

So I've read a lot of stories and a lot fail to catch my interest, i don't want to start any grudges but I can barely read stories like 'Slave of the phantoms' or those long ones, I like it and I don't mean to be rude but I skimmed over this one but thoroughly--you know and that's not a bad thing. I'm usually short on time but to say the least I loved it, I really love it. Ellie's review was a bit extreme (Please don' hate me Ellie) and I believe you did pretty well and I admire the effort you put into this and I understand how much you'd want for people to read this and thank the good lord above you recommended this to me because it's wonderful. I'm difficult on stories and keep in note that you may hear something you may not like.

 I don't regret strolling across the story and I'm going to start being more honest, so here we go.

1. Right, Paliesum, you gave us time to get to know the characters which I love, admire that you did that. I got a lot from the story and it's filled with nice relationships, it didn't feel rushed and I.. liked it.

2. The characters and the plot, that's really nice I like it, there's nothing really more to it.

3. YOUR DETAILING IS AMAZING OH MY LORD. It reminds me of a professional author, I love it so much, I really do and the pictures just make the story cuter.

4. This is pretty important but here's my view on Cliches:

You can't dodge them, not even in real life you can't. I'm an angsty teenager, my nails are actually painted black and I enjoy emo rock and you see that all the time in movies lol but that's kind of not really having to do with the subject--and cliches you know.. uhm, you know... I don't believe cliches are bad if they're written/animated/drawn out well, it depends on the sheer quality of the story.

It may be cliche but in my opinion it was a pretty good story, I enjoyed it, I have no reason to rate it less than a seven then I'd be being salty.

So I'd say a... 10/10 but also to be frank I don't mean to offend anyone lol, thanks for recommending this story!