Talk:My Imaginary Friend/@comment-28284319-20150429080326

Review so far...

''My imaginary friend is my only friend in real life and animal jam. I know she is imaginary because she doesn't have a username and her animal is an animal you can't have. ''

Details? Is she an Axolotl? Is she a Sloth? Expand on the subject.

''She killed my other friends so I could be friends with her. Just her.I live in an asylum, Justice Asylum. They say I'm mad, but I don't believe them. ''

How are you playing on Animal Jam if you live in an asylum? Surely they would at least restrict access to online games.

''I love to kill. The rush of blood, the screams, it is all so amazing for me.''

I can see this in an asylum patient, but how does she kill her victims?

''My friend helps. I hacked the animal jam system, to make me able to kill people. You see, I own a server called Justice. It's where I kill my victims.''

How does she help? Is she schizophrenic? Is her imaginary friend real, but a ghost or something? How did she hack the Animal Jam website (from how the character speaks, she is young)? How does she kill them through Animal Jam? Too many questions left unanswered, giving us plot holes and sometimes badly handled clichès.

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My sever is dark and gloomy (so clichè) but I like it that way, it makes me feel happy for all the hacking and killing that I do.

Yeah, very clichè. I agree. There's also the EXACT SAME PROBLEM about elaborating on your plot points. HOW ARE YOU HACKING IN AN ASYLUM? HOW ARE YOU KILLING THROUGH AJ?

''Whenever someone enters my server, they don't return. I tell my imaginary friend that we will split the body, half and half. Whenever a stray 7-8-9 year old comes on, it's even more fun. "OH NOEZ!" They scream, not-at-all-clichèd-like. "Oh yeaz," I say as I kill them. ''

Do you kill their animal? You can't kill through games unless there's seizures or something.

Keep going, though.