Talk:New Bows Feature/@comment-26478244-20150610015823

Hmm.. Doesn't seem too good to me... Just my opinion. If you didn't scam, beg and scream for a bow, would that still pop up? What if you got it in a gift? I mean before all of this. I really wouldn't think that this would be explicit, since there's only a bit of gore. The dead animals aren't well-described and I can't put the image of what it would look like in my mind. Consider revising this story and editing it if wanted.