Talk:Vicious/@comment-30712534-20161101020035

Here's a few tips:

Try keeping away from the evil wolf stereotype. Make the villain unexpected. For example, try making the villain a small bunny that doesn't seem to strike any suspicion at all. Trick the reader into thinking this bunny isn't bad at all. I also suggest dividing the sentences into paragraphs so the reader won't get confused at what they're reading. So far it's really good! Keep trying and you'll do good!