Talk:Bearwolfalmighty The Killer/@comment-35052087-20190122193125

4/10 Most of the time I had no idea what what happening, lots of grammertical errors.

when an I is by itself it sould be capitialized (did I spell that right?)

I agree with Abbykurle, "and you didn't feel bad for the characters who died because you know nothing about them. It's also not even a surprise that they are going to die because you know what is going to happen to them. "

Also kinda rushed? Uh. How do I say this? Yeah everyone goes to hell, isn't there a single good soul there? I mean if this happened irl I would go to confession right now.