Talk:The Next Generation Alphas/@comment-39117273-20190413152109

At the beginning (First paragraph), The story seems a little rushed/run-on sentence

"Mira and Zios said that they needed new alphas then Greely, Peck, Liza, Graham, Sir Gilbert, and Cosmo were the new Alphas."

Perhaps correct to:

"Mira and Zios said that they needed new alphas. Then, Greely, Peck...."

And so on.