Talk:Greely x Phantom King/@comment-30921738-20190922003050

Um

Yikes

Okay, even for someone who disapproves of homosexuality, chopping Greely into a million peices is absurd. And feeding him to other Jammers?!? What the heck?

And what's with everyone killing themselves in the end? Why did Jimmy hate Tommy? There's just a lot of unexplained things in this story, but at least it has good grammar.