Dark Prison (An Original Story, By The Soul-eater HERSELF)

REVIEWS (not phrases, :T)
''"Nothing is better than a great cup of err.... blood.... to read a great story like this masterpiece!" ~ The Lost World Reviews.''

''"Umm... I guess I like chapter one???" ~ Escortiah, a old and wise creature.''

''"After I continue eating the chains, please... BREAK ME OUTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" ~ Nightheart, an evil black cat.''

''"Oh my, Jic-Jac is in this!" ~ Trix''

Chapter One: World Of Gray
"Pass the ball! Come on JACOB!" Lucas shouted in happiness.

"Not if only you go longer! Hehe!" Jacob purred. "I also bet that you'll miss the ball when I do my SUPER-THROW!!!!!"

That super-throw was going to be the worst mistake I had ever done, thanks to our ancestors... I wouldn't have been born to do a super-throw. And also, thanks to our great, great, great, great.... even 5 more greats.... great Uncle Paul... wouldn't have set off the alarm to challenge our enemies the Zorkiahs.Yes, you just heard me say that. We have enemies, in our world. The Zorkiahs are a huge group of shapeshifting aliens. No, not those green humanoid bug eyed things you see in Sci-fi movies.

Now, Zorkiahs are shapeshifters as I said before. But these things can possess anyone who attacks it sometimes, but it happens very RARELY. Sometimes, no one even knows that they are near someone who is possessed or.... if they, themselves are possessed. It is quite sad really, but in this story. A lot of THINGS happen,  very bad things in fact. So please, try and hurry and release yourself from where ever you are... near a whole lot of light. Because this story is... not a common one.

So beware my child, help yourself. Not the one who is not yourself. But ok... its quite complex as I am, myself.... Zorkiahs can kill anyone when they touch one another.

The purple ones are the least bad, but the blood red ones are the worst and the green ones are common. They are very powerful too as they are QUITE big in population, mass and height. Their bodies can look like otters or meerkats when they are tiny things, and quite harmless. But when you annoy them or when they get older, now... they can become anything...... step by step..... claw by claw.

"Come on Jacob, THROW IT!!!!" Screamed the high pitched Lucas. "JACOB! JACOB! JACOB!"

"Fine, but it'll be the last time" Jacob sighed. "We have to get back home soon, its nearly half past six!"

Jacob kicked some gravel with his feet pads, and dust flew in all directions. Then he twirled and twirled and TWIRLED until he got dizzy and... ZOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The super throw was unleashed, and the ball was thrown into the alley near the 'Died-Clean' prison.

"Where did it go?" Coughed Lucas.

"I don't know, I think it went into a ditch or something...."

"I'll go get it.... I bet its in the alley, with all the other junk and scraps the humans left..."

Suddenly Jacob saw some glowing purple eyes in the dark behind Lucas as he saw him run to the alley.

It was a Zorkiah.

"WATCH OUT LUCAS!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screamed the tiny Jacob.

But it was too late, the Zorkiah pounced on him and Lucas's fur grew a black stripe and he screamed as the Zorkiah pulled some hair out of his fur.

Lucas then raised his paw out of the dark and black slime went down until it met his claws.

"Lucas?" Jacob squeaked.

Jacob saw a hammer in the distance, and he picked it up using his mouth and dashed into the Dark Alley.

He saw the glowing eyes and guessed it was the Zorkiah, and so Jacob jumped on it and drew a giant scar on its rough belly.

Something then pulled him backwards and he saw Lucas, but was it really Lucas?

Lucas then waddled to a fountain with Jacob in his paws and growled "You don't belong here, only a prison would want a criminal like you".

He then pushed Jacob into the fountain and blood poured out of his right paw.

"LUCAS, THIS ISN'T YOU!!!!!!!!" Jacob shrieked in fright.

Lucas then covered Jacob's mouth and tried to push his face into the water, but instead Jacob accidentally hit his head and fell backwards.

"See you soon little brother, if .... you are my little brother"

Chapter Two: You are harmless, NOW.
"Wake up, little boy....." A voice whispered.

In a quick second Jacob opened his eyes and his fur dripped from the water around him, while the coins that were thrown in shined in the glossy clear water.

"...Where am I?" Jacob shivered.

He glanced at a wound in his right leg of which was still healing, and then he felt his face of which he could feel the bones everywhere.

"Mummy, why is that man naked in the fountain?" A little girl kitten clenched her mother's hand.

"I don't know Isabelle.... he might be one of those Streaking Seagulls" The mother replied with a strange tone in her voice.

"Well, madame .... I don't know what I am...." Jacob interrupted slowly, then he paused and spoke again slowly and noticed that his voice got deeper.

Then he started to look at himself and it seemed like time past.

"...Umm... mind me for asking but... what year is this...?"

"Oh, silly.... its 2064....." The mother smiled shyly.

...Oh my Giraffe......"''

Jacob realized he was a full grown adult.

"Can we help him, Mummy?" The little girl asked jumping up and down.

" ... I guess we could give him some cookies "

In a split second Jacob leaned over and started stuffing his face into the basket full of cookes.

"THANKS FOR THE COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jacob screamed in delight.

"Your welcome!" The little girl squeaked.

"Shadows aren't welcome here ... " A tall white cat in a dark green jacket, and a furry trapper hat hissed.

Jacob's ears pricked up and turned his head facing the other cat.

" ... Are you kidding me, do you think I AM AN IDIOT?" Jacob snarled back.

"Oh, little Jacob ... your not an idiot ... but a criminal"

I know that voice!!!!!!" ''Gasped Jacob as fell back into the fountain.

The mother ran away grasping her child with her screaming.

The cat in the jacket walked closer as he closed his eyes and threw his hat on the ground showing his face.

It was Lucas.

"Lucas ... WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? YOUR SUPPOSED TO "

"Shh... come with me ..." Interrupted Lucas, pressing a claw on Jacob's mouth.

He bent down and picked up Jacob and placing him on the ground, then grabbing his hat putting it on his head softly.

Lucas hopped foward and signaled Jacob to come, and so he followed Lucas while tiptoeing behind.

Lucas looked up at the central bank and grinned.

"This is the place ... for our little 'visit' "

Jacob gulped and turned his head to the side.

Lucas opened the doors and his eyes grew bigger sparkling at the diamond in the middle of the bank, calling him to come.

"What have I done ... "

The diamond shined in Jacob's eyes as well, but he shaked his head and decided to go back outside.

Suddenly, the alarm went off and Lucas pushed past Jacob with security guards knocking Jacob over and getting annoyed.

"LUCAS!!!!!!!!!" Jacob screamed, but it was too late.

Lucas then turned around, and a few tears streamed down his eyes in fear.

"REMEMBER JACOBSON!!!!!! YOU ARE HARMLESS NOW!!!!!!!!" Lucas shrieked as the police came into the chase and knocking him out after.

Who is Jacobson?

"Oh shoot, thats my real name ..... " Jacob reached his paw out, and collapsed as people streamed out of the bank as the alarms continued their ear killing screeching.

"Where is this mad place ...".

Chapter Three: Shadow's are not always evil.
"You there!" A news reporter shouted at Jacob still on the ground.

Jacob closed his eyes and was like a ragdoll now.

"GET THIS MAN TO THE HOSPITAL!!!" The news reporter's voice faded away as beeping and booming noises filled Jacob's ears.

Jacob opened his eyes and looked up at some doctors who were staring down at him.

".... Where am I....?" He whimpered.

"Well your at the hospital sir," One of the nurses popped their heads into the room. "A lot of people ran over you, and so we had no choice but to do surgery on your head and ... fur I guess... hehe"

Jacob looked at his stitches and crossed his arms in anger, then he suddenly remembered Lucas.

"WHERE IS LUCAS?!?!?!?!" He cried.

The doctors looked at eachother in confusion and sighed.

"We don't know where this ... 'Lucas' is ... but if you mean the one that stole the diamond-"

"YES THATS HIM!!!!!!!" Jacob stood up on the bed.

"Charlotte, ... give him the shot ... "

A grinning female nurse stormed into the room holding a needle in one paw, and a rock in the other.

"Hold sssssstill ... Jacob, I will fix you up very quickly " Charlotte whispered in a calm but bitter voice.

But it was too late, Jacob went out of the room rushing across each floor and stairs and falling to his knees at the bottom of the Hospital.

" ... I am coming Lucas ... I will not wait any longer, staying here in this underworld!" Jacob puffed.

As he walked along the footpath searching for Lucas he noticed a newspaper in a tree, so he snatched it off the branch and read its bold lettering that said at the bottom:

-'Here we have DIED CLEAN in this Prison, and we need guards to look after our prisnors. So we need YOU, to come and make them feel safe again! Will you help them?-                                                                 '

'No thanks, I'll rather find a new' Jacob paused, and looked in front of him.

It looked like 'Died Clean' Prison that was with the Advertisement in the paper, WAIT! Was it the same Prison that was beside the alley the Zorkiah was in and hurted Lucas?

"No, it couldn't be ... it just can't be..."

Jacob walked around it scanning the walls with his eyes, and it was the Died Clean prison.

"I might go inside just to check if its safe"

As he placed his right paw on the doorstep, the wind opened the doors and a bunch of people sitting in chairs looked at him in confusion and whispered to one another while he walked foward to the woman at the desk.

"Can I help you with something Sir?" She asked.

"Oh, sorry... I am just having a look around jussssst checking this place out ..." Jacob replied back, shifting his eyes to the paper in front of her.