Talk:Despise/@comment-27070860-20190623202755

Oo, loved this, right up my alley~! I really enjoyed the vague descriptions, makes it creepy (the good kind of creepy) and it feels just lovely to read- the relationship between the narrator & Major (and it’s fall) was in my opinion very well written~ I genuinely got pulled in by the characters. That being said, I am still confused about what happened with the book, as well as Twinkle- it might just be the fact that I am useless when it comes to reading in between the lines (I failed almost every test that had to do with poetry, so that’s saying something), but I read this at least ten times and couldn’t come to a conclusion on my own. Nor did I really figure out what was happening to the narrator at the beginning

And maybe that was the point of it, because not every story should be grasped fully- and if you haven’t realised by now this is a really long comment so I should probably stop so yeah

Good story, I’ll be looking out for any others you’ll post ^^ Good luck with any future works~