User blog:Rexory/A big step to save YouTube

So, I want to send feedbacks to YT and I need some grammar fixes. Please help me. Here's my draft feedback:

"Hi YouTube,

First of all, I really appreciate your way to protect children on YouTube by complying with COPPA.

But, I'm really concerned about new YouTube rules that prohibit "Made For Kids" videos to have personalized ads. Many creators  dont like this new rules and some of them assumed 2020 is the end of YouTube. Some creators decide to stop making money from YouTube and delete their channels. This is hard for some creators, especially those who get their main incomes from YouTube.

Although, I'm not American. I care about others channels. I have a good idea for protecting children on YouTube!

So, here's my idea.

Parents/guardians turn on "Kids Mode" from Settings>Advanced Setting>Turn Kids Mode on or off. There's age setting like in Youtube Kids too! Make sure the setting is out of reach from children and hard enough to set.

When Kids Mode turned on, the restriction for "Made For Kids" content will apply except some features:

-Videos can appear in Recommended and it will be searchable. -Cards will appear, but some videos might not available in Kids Mode.

And some features should be added for children's safety

-Can block vids/channels. -Search history and watching history will be separate like this, "Watching/search history in Kids Mode" and "Watching/search History". This feature will help parents to monitoring their children.

Every time a creator uploads a video, they must tell them what their video is about. If the video contain bad language, intense violence, NSFW, or other things that kids shouldn't see, the video will not be available in Kids Mode.

If Kids Mode turned off, YouTube Youtube will function as usual without any Kids Mode's restriction."