Talk:Bearwolfalmighty The Killer/@comment-30921738-20190123085709/@comment-30921738-20190123172047

May I give a suggesion? To make the chracters more likable, show them playing aj a little bit before getting murdered. And to make it less predictable, get rid of a few murders and add more detail to the others. You could also show a little background info on Bearwolfalmighty. Show why he is killing others. Is he mentally ill? Was he abused as a child? These things will make the story much more enjoyable.