Talk:Bloody Chains/@comment-32392816-20170819175647/@comment-31417255-20180704003038

Another writing tip for you:

PLEASE don't write edgy characters like this and the OP's godawful "OC"! They are not scary at all and are incredibly cringe-worthy. Since this comment is old, you've probably improved by now, but I'm gonna comment this here just in case.