Talk:All you gotta do is Live, love, lie-- and did I forget lie?/@comment-43836919-20200213112002

""You're so beautiful Celine...""

five seconds later

"Now I'm in need of money"

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jk I'm still here

FIRST OF ALL, WB!! <3 this story looks good so far you're good at writing dang. There's some quotation marks and punctuation errors, but you'll figure it out! 8.5/10 so far, your writing's pretty legit and I look forward to seeing regular edits

My watchful eye will come to this page every morning as I have nothing else to do

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