User blog comment:Willownerd/A story im writing/@comment-27070860-20191022164526/@comment-37935611-20191022212950

Thank you! I do make a lot of typos :') but I appreciate the crit and I will definitely try to cut the amount of 'ands' I put in my sentences and  cut the sentences shorter!

I'm not too fond when it comes to writing, this is my second story im writing and I have a lot of plans for it.