Thread:AccountThatHasToBeLookedAt/@comment-37273038-20181022210950/@comment-30425714-20181023015214

RunningInTheSandstorm wrote: AccountThatHasToBeLookedAt wrote: FTFO wrote: AccountThatHasToBeLookedAt wrote: If you have VPNs, good! You're resourceful.

If not, you're a liar...and I hate those.

I never threatened you, as far as I remember. It was simply a warning. A threat would be where I would say I would stab you in the middle of the night. If you think Abbykurle is this spoiled, then report it to the other admin, Claw, or the owner Graystripe. I have yet to see a constructive criticism from you, or anything reasonable.

If Abbykurle is fired for bigotry, then good for you. I hate liars too. Good, we can agree on something! :)

Check my other comment to see why it was indeed a threat, just not one of violence.

You won't fucking look for it, you nonce. Go look through my main's contributions and you should find it. First off, what is "it?" Is it those critiques?

Those critiques on your message board are enough proof for me that you aren't the most effective critic out there. You only comment on conventions, and nothing else. You never talk about craft, as writing is an art. You act like it's an assignment for someone's 6th grade class. If you want to give a critique on art, at least make it helpful and constructive, and focus on the art instead of whether it is correct or not, and how to improve it.

I want you to post EVERY interaction between you and Abbykurle.

You better not call me lazy, I can't track down all the alts you have. Great! You can infer! Good for you! /s

Just because I don't critique under a guise of sophistication doesn't mean I'm a bad critic. I'm just blunt.

You sound like the kind of person who would look at a literal piece of shit on an easel and call it an abstract masterpiece. NEWSFLASH! Shit isn't art, whether it be literal or figuartive shit.

I'm practical, I don't treat writing as this whimsical magic force that you seem to see it as. I treat it as you treat food. If someone serves you a hair-filled pile of gunk and calls it a cake, then it's shit. It doesn't matter how much pretty icing the baker tried to put on it. It's still shit.

And again, if you'd look through my fucking contributions on my main, or even just my main's message wall, you'd see my critiques.

Haha! No.

If you want to see every fucking word I've said to that brat, then you look for it yourself!

I never asked you to look for any of my alts. I asked you to check my main. My alts are like burner phones. They don't stay around long.

Now why don't you stop demanding me to do shit for you and get up off your ass. All of your "critiques" are defended with the phrase "I'm blunt."

First off, you do not have to be that rude.

More importantly, though, if you want to see more quality content then tell them how to improve. It doesn't help when you say a thing such as "bad" and then move on.

The point of a critique is to be descriptive and provide advice.

You can do it in the simplest language possible.

What you do is simply say something is bad, provide some grammar convention tips if you can, even though writing is an ART, and is not built completely on a set of rules.

I have seen some of your critiques and they are barely even critiques at all.

I'm not saying everything is art, I'm saying that you should have more loose interpretation when it comes to stuff like this.