Talk:Virtual/@comment-30921738-20191223233310

Well written, but it's hard to believe that a 9 year old has a boyfriend and plays PG-13 games such as the hacked Animal Jam. It was also very confusing when Lily was hunting down the little kid and AJHQ told them where he lives. I'm still not exactly sure what the kid even did or why Lily was hunting him, and it would be nice if you could clarify whether AJHQ was the hackers or the original child-friendly AJHQ.

Besides that, it has good grammar and is very well written, everything was otherwise very clear and easy to read. I look forward to seeing more of your work!