Talk:A Time of Battle/@comment-43898812-20190927032634

Quite eye-catching, if I don't say so myself. (I'm just gonna do sentences on bullet points for this review. Paragraphs are for my non-lazy occassions, which are exceptionally rare, haha.)

The last sentence was briefly sad. Good job on that!

The story had a decent length. Although a chapter or two more couldn't hurt.

The effort was the satisfactory. Not cheap made.

A creative touch. It might seem sort of uncreative if you think shallowly, but these sort of things take thinking, whether you like it or not.

Otherwise, it was a solid tale. Easy to understand, and quick for people who only have 90 seconds on their paws!

- 7wolf4 @ AJ #storyreviews