Talk:The Next Generation/@comment-36740261-20200120045603

Ooh, I like it! There are some minor problems with the story, but I don't feel like addressing them. Only real problem is that I'm not really hooked on this. Right when I found out that Vicky and Dax had powers (although I don't even know if Dax has powers, because you never mentioned them. That's one of the minor problems.) and that they were Gods, I stopped reading after a chapter. In stories like this when the main character is a God and has powers, they are very overpowered and usually don't have that much personality. Once I continue reading though, maybe that won't be the case.

Anyway, cool story so far!