Talk:"Logged Out"/@comment-26973526-20160423142838

" Animal Jam is meant for children 12 and under, not for mature people."

(Burgerpants voice) I'm 15 years old and I've already wasted my entire life (on Animal Jam).

" When I logged back in, my animal wasn't a pink-and-yellow Arctic Wolf with the name, "Miss Sparklegem" anymore."

Well, isn't that spoooooky?

Ohh boy. How do you "accidentally" stab someone IN THE HEART? Here comes the Cliche Train!

Also, how old are your characters? Marina's parents should have noticed something was up if they're as old as you implied (12 and under)!! And why did Marianne's parents randomly let her grab a knife and RUN? Really neglectful, if you ask me.

Age up the characters and you've got a good suspense and shock factor. 7/10.