Tear: The Shattered One

Brief view of the beginning, not a chapter

As the sun went down, a big blackout of night covered the morning sky. A black creature walked on stepping stones looking like paws, bigger than his. He stopped, sat down, and looked up at the sky.

"I'm here..." He whispered to himself, with a faint voice that seemed to echo.

He looked down, and he felt raindrops falling down. Quicker, the raindrops came down faster, harder, and louder. He then got up and looked straight up.

He seemed to find an echo of a voice.

"I see, you are here."

He then looked forward and walked on the stepping stones.

Chapter 1: Lonely

A black, shadowy creature with a skeleton on its head to cover its' eyes, sort of gas-shadowy bat wings, and black claws, roamed around Jamaa.

As it walked, it thought of its mother, Toria.

(This is what happened when Toria died.)

It was almost nighttime, and it was very rainy outside. Toria ran up to a hill, trying to find food for her son, Tear. A streak of lightning filled the sky, and thunder clapped as loud as a blue whale jumping into the sea, making a big splash.

She heard the sound of a pack of wolves howli-ng. A second after they stopped, it sounded like they were running up to Toria. Toria ran away as fast as she could, but the wolves were too fast. Toria couldn't run anymore, so she tried to run, but all she could do was jog. The wolves soon caught up, and caught Toria.

The wolves then killed her.

Tear didn't know if she was alive, or never coming back.