Talk:EXPERIMENT 47 (Original Version)/@comment-35052087-20180925132809

I proofread thiS

HAve some tips please :)

Grammer:

LETTERS NEED TO BE UPPERCASE

IN THE START OF A SENTENCE

please put periods D:

Story:

Don't rush the story! That's is the recipe for a crappy story! or things to happen people have to really get into the story. Please don't rush it!

Have a good plot. Half the time I had no idea was was going on. ;-; Please explain to readers what's goin on D:

~TheSpared

(p.s. please follow these tips :) )