User blog:FireFlows/story

here’s a story i made up

A girl sat next to me at lunch every single day. We didn’t know each other’s names, and we barely ever spoke to each other. However, she is considered to be my best friend for me.

We weren’t disabled or anything, but we just didn’t talk. And it’s all because of our school.

Our school has very strict rules, which does not allow anyone to talk unless they are asked a question. Our school is different from a lot of other schools due to our strict rules.

People have been expelled for talking without being asked a question, and they have been suspended for passing notes to each other. We can still talk to our family outside of school as much as we wish, so maybe it’s just our school.

Why all of these harsh rules exist, I am unsure. Maybe it’s because we are a very religious place and things like talking are considered to be “unholy,” but maybe it’s something else.

Maybe they’re trying to brainwash us. I really don’t like that idea, but it’s definitely a possibility.

Perhaps it’s even a combination of the two. Or maybe I’m just making this all up, and then I’ll wake back up.

If I don’t wake up, though, I’ll know I’m living in a nightmare.

tell me what you think. have i improved my writing? or have i not? maybe provide some feedback?

i was kinda trying out something new. im not very good at writing horror stories, i think.

sorry it’s so short. i haven’t wrote here in a while and i really just wanted to write something for once