Talk:The Jamaaliday Wish/@comment-26250328-20161222001405

Notice: I am rewriting the later parts of the story and adding more buildup for two reasons. Firstly, the current version of this story keeps turning into Mad Max: Furry Road because I have writers block. I'm going to have to go back and change things cause I can't keep it simple. Secondly, there isn't enough time spent with Daniel and Holly and it's difficult for the chemistry between them and other characters to feel real because it's so boring. There needs to be more unique development with them before I start the climax.

Here's to hoping I can get this done before Christmas...