Talk:Black Hearts/@comment-31304979-20160606060130/@comment-28686496-20160609014350

I agree with you on the concept part. The leopard doesn't have a very good reason to attack the Jammers, and they should be attacking AJHQ, even if they do not know who closed the cave. And if they closed it, how did it open again? Maybe provide something like, "An AJHQ worker accidentally deleted the file closing off the cave" or something like that. Maybe try to take the revenge concept and twist it into something else.