Talk:The KIdnapper Alpha/@comment-34100315-20180210173423

Ummmm.. let be give some contructive critisim.

It's a neat consept, butttttt it's a little hard to tell what's going on. First of all, what did Greely mean by "Little child, prepare to enter your new body. You shall forget everything in the past." All I saw was the child dying! What, did the child turn into Zios? And why was Zios fine with what Greely did?

So for that, 8.2/10. Definitely good, but needs WAY more explinations.