Talk:The Wolf, the Kitten and the Phantoms/@comment-30921738-20180616182050

I find it a bit odd that her parents forced her to make a book and attempted to kill her. The beginning was really good, but try to make it a bit more realistic. By that I mean, don't have Lucky try to kill her mother. Maybe she just scratched her, and her dad made her go to her room, but she refused. Then her mom made her go to her room and do extra homework. It is also a bit odd that her parents didn't stop her from leaving, so maybe she snuck out the window.