Talk:Rise of The Elements/@comment-27070860-20170517134542

Yo

I just realised you finished Slave of the Phantoms, so I went over and finished reading it- good job on it ^^

Name (and gender): Miaklianne (friends call him Mia for short) -male

Appearance: a dark green lemur, with silver rings around his tail and eyes. He has two different colored eyes, left- light green, right- dark red. He keeps a red sword with him at all times, along with a dusty old pair of boots (long ago ruined, but refuses to throw them away) He also wears a pair of light brown gloves.

Personality: He's quiet and very often calm. He doesn't speak much, not because he's shy or dislikes others, but simply because he hates small talk or any conversation without purpose. Although he might look emotionless at first glance, he's quite caring- and sarcastic.

When coming to making decisions, he won't follow the group if he's sure theres a better way to do something. He's often stubborn and keeps his ground, but respects other's opinions. His main intention is keeping others safe.

He also has a strong sense of respect and honour- which not much jammers care to notice. He hates trespassing on other's territory, but if he has to for the good of his own friends, he will. Yet if he does that, he will refuse to harm anyone and respects everyone there.

If you'd harm him, or his friends, yet regret it, he'd forgive you. If anyone things of him as weak because of that, he'll probably call you out for a duel. Even though he might seam weak, he keeps all his honour and has no intenion of loosing it- if he has to choose life or honour, he'll gladly pick honour over his own life.

Origins: Son of a mechanic and a dentist. He was raised in a small village that was hid away somewhere far from Jamaa. He studied medicine and anatomy, wanting to become a doctor. His parents were extreamly honorable and respectful (as was the rest of the village- some would say the village was a bit 'back in time', but who really knows?) After realising he had powers, his parents told him that he won't find anything that would satisfy him in the village, his strong want to help others pulling him away from his hometown.

Other: His power is something like a healing power. While studying for a doctor's tittle, during a test, he saw his powers for the first time. He told about a jammer's spine problem, and was asked what he would do to fix it (what to use, etc.).

To the surprise of the people who were keeping watch over him, he closed his eyes, and after opening them, he (and only he) was able to see a bunddle of floating strings infront of his face. After a moment he realised this looked exactly like a 'floating copy of the jammer's back'- which was, indeed, quite creepy. He moved the strings around, before noticing the problem. He kept moving the floating strings around, rearranging all the strings from the their damaged position into a position that looked like a healthy spine. (nobody knew how he did this- nobody could see him do it, expect himself)

The next day the jammer came up to him, thanking him. Apperently the next day they went to check their back because it felt different, and it turned out that his spine was as healthy as ever.

To sum up he can move around other people's insides, repair broken bones, ripped insides and remove something from a body. Along with his doctor tittle, he has learned much about using and creating medicine/poison.

Good luck on the story, m8