Talk:Climbing Paws/@comment-44712112-20200124002459

The concept is okay I guess, and I see where you were going with this, but it didn't feel authentic or realistic to me.

Reading too long chapters isn't very fun, especially prologues. They're supposed to tell you why a character in the story is doing what they're doing, not tell you all the main information, introduce the characters and the storyline. Reading the prologue was... boring. That's how this entire story so far felt: boring.

At the start it didn't really hook me, just left me wondering what was going on. I'm fairly new, but this first story of yours didn't impress me. I'm sorry, it just doesn't feel for me.