Talk:Mira and the Slipping of the Sun/@comment-27070860-20180516191720

I really like this so far- it’s nicely written and has a sort of creepy, mysterious undertone to it (or at least, that’s what I got from it). (I can also safely announce that for whatever reason, the  ”Ancient Sabertooth”  is my favorite so far)

Although I do find the change of narration every chapter a bit confusing (I just can’t remember names for some reason, my brain is capable of remembering chapters upon chapters of history books, but can’t remember a simple name). But the overall plot is interesting enough for me to work around that.

Anyway, this is too long already- good luck writing the story and all that~