Thread:PPermelia/@comment-36740261-20200114011652/@comment-37729082-20200117031325

Mothleaf.

Mothleaf..

Here is my critiscism,

Usually whilst browsing the wiki I never tend to read stories that length because they never succeed to grab my attention, and this is certainly one of the first to do so and THE first to actually make me feel anger towards a character, no other story on this entire wiki (not even my own) has stirred up those feelings inside of me, This story has such an exceptional and original plot, climbing, you turned something that may have sounded boring and turned it into something fascinating, I will surely be back for more.

It was amazing, you painted a portrait with words for me to look upon, Kahuela (I'm not sure if I typed it in right) is a unique character, to me he didn't seem greedy only gullible. But boy, that story, that story oh my lord as I said before it aroused feelings of anger inside of me towards the stranger and for killing the poor fox I'd like to break the stranger's neck. I'm really excited and I'd love to see more~

P.S You're an amazing writer.

~PPermelia