Talk:Midnight Sun and Midday Moon (Accepting OCs)/@comment-43643973-20191119195700/@comment-43788761-20191119233825

Okay, in order to use her here, there are some things that need to change or go:

- She's way, way overpowered. I'd keep it to one mild ability and maybe a secondary, but related one. The guns would not fit into the story.

- She needs a more balanced personality. To be somewhat harsh, the gist of what I got was "a Harley Quinn that's not scared of anything, likes sweets (not a personality trait), and rEaLlY rAndoM". If she's not scared of anything by which most people are scared, why? What motivates her?

Also, some things that you might not be aware of:

-Arctic wolves live about ten years. even if we cut her lifetime in half, she'd have the 'spirit' of a one-hundred-year-old human. It's cool, but I don't think you intended it.

-You said she's female, but also that she doesn't have an assigned sex. That's not possible. There are a spectrum of genders, but only to common knowledge a few true sexes: male, female, and intersex. I'm A-OK with making them genderfluid, queer, or nonbinary, and having her be of the female sex or intersex to some degree, but I need some clarity on what you prefer.