Talk:Empty Servers/@comment-29635358-20160812100124

This story is fine. A little cliche, but good for your first creepypasta. While it is not that realistic, it's fine. Red eyes are a tad bit overused, but that is not important. Nice story. For a first creepypasta, 6/10. I hope you read this comment. I see you have replied to comments similiar to this one. This is not rude, and we mean no harm. We are simply criticizing your work, and giving you some tips for your next story. Good luck.