Talk:The spike's spikes/@comment-26502668-20170526004042

Mmm... it's a bit too  cheesy  for a Creepypasta. Overall, I think I'd rate it a 2/10. Here's what you can do to improve it:


 * Write, write, write. Hey, you can't improve on your writing if you barely do it!


 * Look up the most common themes and cliches for creepypastas. Write about what isn't on those lists.


 * That's pretty much all the advice I can give. Again, seeing as this is your first creepypasta, it's perfectly normal for it to be imperfect. But trust me: As a Wiki veteran, your writing will improve over time. Keep on being your best!