User blog comment:LunaMouse23/Mouse's Guide to Writing AJ Creepypastas/@comment-26893778-20150816103859

Thank you for making this U.U I'm new and I wanna make good pastas :P idk about the gore... Is this a good example? :

As Alex logged into his account, a scream echoed through jamaa. A familiar head, impaled by a long, slender blood-stained spear was visible as the oblivious jammers fell to the blood-stained floor.