Talk:Portraits/@comment-39615662-20191016053147/@comment-43788761-20191016090057

Oh heck, that's really kind of you. Thank you very much for the criticism; I disgorged this loogie in a day and just whacked it through a spellchecker, so I never got a chance to fiddle with pacing. I'll look harder at that, it's one of my bigger weaknesses as a writer and it'll be good practice. Thanks again, ever so much ^-^