Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-27600777-20170829080349/@comment-32004538-20170914185432

(The only things I can see is that you wrote incorrectly was  "Silvers back" and "jumed off". I'm basically this grammar policegirl. My eyes detect these things. Also I'm doing schoolwork at the moment so it may take a little bit for me to reply)

Silver relaxed. A sparkle in her eyes, she inquired, "How'd you do that?" Almost as an afterthought, she glanced backwards before turning around again.