Thread:BlackDragonKid/@comment-26863232-20181107214505/@comment-26863232-20181113225803

(I guess you present a clear quest early on and keep each day eventful, or at least keep reminding the player of the goal (or IMPENDING DOOOOOOM).  And also to keep a less clear mystery behind the quest, leaving the reader to ponder a little.)

You head back to West Wing. All the rubble has been neatly sorted and piled at the edge of town. It seems like most of the salvageables were already taken away, leaving behind all the broken remains. A pile of blackened wood and stone, rusted and charred pipes and buckets, a small, crumbling statue, and a stack of smoldering books (and book pages). There's also a simple pile of soot.