Talk:The Gift That Cursed Me/@comment-27078273-20151207221904

This is honestly a really good story. You avoided some decent pasta cliches, which was good (because most are overused). This had as lightly eerie feel to it, but it didn't actually scare me much. And also, you didn't make it 100% centered around Animal Jam, and added some real-life aspects.

Nice story, man. 8.5/10