Talk:Is it really? an animal jam creepypasta/@comment-32182769-20170710142346/@comment-27806843-20170710184313

You may want to break your story into a few smaller paragraphs as it is difficult to read things when they are in a large wall of text, and you will also want to make a new paragraph when a character speaks. You should also capitalize the first letter in the name of a person or a place ("Jamaa Township" instead of "jamaa township" and "Magic" instead of "magic" or "Major" instead of "major" or "Wretched" instead of "wretched".) You also need to capitalize the first letter in a word at the beginning of your sentences. There are also a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, good story, and I'm looking forward to more of your Animal Jam stories and tales. ;) Have a fantabulous day! :D