Talk:Below the basement/@comment-27070860-20171008190935/@comment-27070860-20171013131557

I actually really liked that part of the story- you didn't use blood (which againced common opinion actually makes the story worse, at least for me) and I think that's what made me enjoy this story apart from most of the other creepy pastas. And Grammar errors aren’t that bad, but since you can't write it in word, maybe re-read it a couple of times? It never hurts to be sure you've got everything right (this is only because I'm a perfectionist- I hate that about myself XD)

I overall really liked reading it, it's not even badly written, I just though the ending was a bit too bland for my taste. Other than that, I liked the overall idea- I'll be looking forward to more from you~