Talk:Getting Low/@comment-26863232-20161116015614

Pretty good!! I'm interested. I do have some criticism though, but please don't take this as hate!!

o Try not to make an 'anti- Mary Sue' (I don't know why it's called that, but it just is :b). Making a depressing backstory is okay as long it isn't 'too much'.

What I say you do well is that you can really make an interesting conflict!!


 * sits on chair and waits for more*