Talk:Climbing Paws/@comment-43836919-20200121154847

One thing: The prologue seems like a chapter, not really a prologue. And there are some parts that are a little yk, but otherwise...

So, a lot of stories on this wiki are sort of cliche, you know, the same things over and over, animals, wolves. You kind of just read them and you're done with them. Honestly..

This story, just reading the prologue, it hooks you from the start, like you want more. And I'll be honest here, I can't think of a single story on here that really captures you, that you actually actually await edits. For me, this story has an amazing plot. And I'm gonna be really honest with you, almost nobody has written this good.

You could suggest other stories, and sure, they are, but this has you captured. It makes you want more. It makes you think and feel emotion. I think I saw you saying that you want to make it like a real story length. I wish you the best of luck with that, honestly.

Tbh, I didn't really expect such a work of art from you. I showed it to my brother, just a little bit of the prologue and he absolutely loved it. He didn't really understand the lines though, it's sort of confusing and sort of makes the words a little harder.

Like I was saying, almost every story here is cliche, oh, the animals have powers and whatnot, but I've been thinking about things like why not phantoms? Why not tell a war from a phantom's perspective? And, what if another person had the powers and someone was normal and looked up to them? Things like this make it different in a good way, but yours didn't even need to have a different prospect because it's eye-catching.

I've been wanting to read a lot of your stories for a while now, so I'm very glad I got this chance. Trust me, as soon as I could, I was here. I've heard from other users about it and once I actually got to read it, I loved it!

I'm amazed by this, keep it up, I'll definitely be back.