Talk:Silence/@comment-27070860-20191005183841

OO summer camps and mysteries? A cast of five quirky characters? Sign me up

Anyways, this sounds interesting thus far! I hope you’ll have more time to update it soon~

(Also I noticed you repeat your words a lot; it’s not a bad thing, but for example in this part-

"Wake up, Nature!"

'''"WHAT? Oh... it's you Nava...." said Nature, still hoping she could have 5 more minutes of sleep.'''

Nature tiredly went from her bed, (…)”

Maybe try to replace the name ‘Nature’ with ‘the fox’ or ‘the half-asleep animal’? Get creative- it’ll have a nicer ring to it if the same words don’t get repeated as often~)