Talk:One, Two, Three/@comment-27070860-20171130215727

I like this so far- I really enjoyed the way you wrote the 'texting-with-my-friend’ part, pretty creative~

The only thing throwing me off a little is how quickly the main character gets comfortable with the dragons and just accepts an extinct species as a pet, not really questioning it- I would have loved to see her struggle a bit more with the dragons. Also, at the beginning, some of the sentences felt a bit dragged out or too long- I'd recommend trying to write shorter sentences- it saves you from grammar mistakes and makes life all that easier ^^

(I’m also not sure if I just read this wrong, but I think there might be an error with the “(…) well, I didn't really know what it was, but there was "Hsssss....." (…)” part. I’m pretty sure there should be something after the ‘was’)

I’m looking forward to the rest of the story, good luck with it- I see a lot of potential in this to become something great^^