Talk:Baking/@comment-27070860-20190715164546

I like this thus far; Velvet seems like a likable character that has quite the potential- though the character development seems to be aimed more at the supporting characters than the main one. It would be nice to get to know who we’ re reading about in the next few chapters.

(also, I’ m just going to say I’ ve taken a liking to Ember, I’ ll curious what you have in store for her ^^)

I like the overall writing style and the story seems intriguing, I’ ll be looking out for your updates~!