Talk:A Journal Of A Fox/@comment-28439145-20171203180054

This story is... interesting. The problem is that I don't quite know the identity of this story. Is it a continuous murder mystery story? I feel like it's not long or scary enough to be considered a creepypasta, but then again, it's made unclear whether it will continue or not. Or is it just a creepypasta? If so, I don't think there's enough buildup to the final paragraph and it just comes out of nowhere, but not in a jumpscare kind of way.

The concept seems original though, I'll give you that.