Talk:So You Think You Can Survive/@comment-29866768-20170130145508

I really like it, but there are a few suggestions I have.... .try not to put (the last part) and stuff like that next to each part .where did daisy get the boomseeds? .why would a random animal give two bunnies a paper? .there are a few spelling errors, so look over your story. Besides these things, this is one of the best stories I've read all day! Great job!