Talk:Hell's Server/@comment-24954402-20141231215047

Nice for a new writer, but lacks new ideas from the usual (no offense)

"Hell's server" "Hell" "Server called Hell", all of those are used all the time. (I've used it before :P)

"Bloody animal" "Flashing screen" etc. Are used almost always.

Perhaps try to spice things up a bit; grab the reader's attention :)