Vicious

This may or may not be a horrible story. I am not new to the wiki but I am new to making creepy pastas. I do like and expect some constructive criticism, but if it's like mean or hurtful words like: I hate this creepy pasta you are the worst at making them, get a life loser, this one is so bad I barf every time I read it, etc. Yes I know thats exaggerated but I am trying to get the point across, here are examples of constructive criticism: It's good but you might want to add a bit more to make it more spooky, good try but here is what you can add, it's good but try to fix some grammar then it will be better (unless that was intended) but good job overall, etc. Now with this out of the way we can begin with the story!