User blog comment:SilverHexxitFights/How I define characters/@comment-25355798-20140904123514

I'll confess at first I was like "Waiwu" about the weaponry until I got your point.'

Interesting! Really good tips/points. I'll keep these in mind while writing it.

Heck, you're doing better than a lot of modern authors. Susanne Collins was probably right to give Katniss a bow and arrow, but Veronica in giving Tris a gun? I know due to the plot/theme/summary of it she kind of had to wield one since there was no other circumstance, but in general it would not have probably been her weapon of choice.

I'm thinking outloud. Anyway <3 it

BTW have you seen my old writer's tips/guide? (In my blog list). Could help too.