Talk:The Ever Maze/@comment-30921738-20191107061111

Okay when I first read this story, I liked it but forgot about it and I haven't seen it since. But today I noticed it had been edited several times and decided to check it out. And boy am I glad that I did!

It's got an incredible, creative plot, written very nicely and clearly, and I love the creepiness mixed in with the adventure aspect.

It's only ever cliche in the beginning, but I like that because you think it's gonna be another average creepypasta about evil spikes, but then the cliche factor is completely erased and leaves you with an awesome plot and mystery that sucks you in and leaves you hooked.

I also like how you made the villain. He's not your average, evil person who has absolutely no emotion or character, and does ridiculous things for flawed motives. While we still don't know who he is or his motives for creating the maze, the mystery surrounding him is suspenseful and brings up a lot of theories. And I like the way you make him seem a bit insane, but he still acts (somewhat) like a normal person. Unlike most villains who are all just "haha ur dead i dont care, lol im gonna kill everyone u love fur no reason!"

I also like it that the main character fell for the collar trick. I know that seems cruel, but it makes them more... human. I mean, let's admit it. Not one of us would be able to resist the urge to put on the collar forever.

Wonderful story, I look forward to more.