Talk:ORANGE SPIKES... ORANGE SPIKES.../@comment-29963882-20180105225950

orange spikes, orange spikes, in shards, all over the floor

I think your story is really nice! There's a lot of unexplained blood that makes it less creepy, really, there's a ton of blood, which seems terrifying at first, but really it's just not that creepy at all.

I recommend you refrain from using blood too much in creepypastas. Nice concept though!