User blog:Ilovepandasforreals/the online dating story part 2

hello guys welcome to the online dating story part 2! if you have not seen the first part click here to see it. http://ajstories.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Ilovepandasforreals/Online_dating_story

ok before we begin I want to give a shout-out to abbykurle. who gave me some good ideas for this one and ( if this gets good support ) the next few, I have decided if you win the shout-out that you will now get a prize. the next lucky person who gets the shout-out will get a green nm holiday sweater. so if you get some good ideas hurry to post them in the cooments before it is to late. ok now sit back and enjoy.

silver got out of his car at an old factory where his evil brother said he was holding ivy. " I remeber this place " said silver it was pecks paint factory. his dad use to work there before a phantom raid 20 years ago. ho went over to the old rusty door that was hanging off it's hinges. he pushed it open carefully. unless there was a serios change since the last time he had seen his brother, silver was sure there would be tons of deadly booby traps. and he was not disapointed. once the door opened a doven of posion arrows came flying at the door. silver jumped back. " thanks for the warm welcome bro" said silver. he stepped inside he looked from room to room every room he entered had some kind of booby trap, (trap doors with hungery crocs, a bunch of skorpins, you know the normal ) then he reached the bosses office. he was possetive there were a doven heanchmen waiting for him in there but he was also possetive ivy was in there. so he changed in and knocked over a doven phantoms who all fell out cold. he looked around. ivy was not in there. but there was a crow just sitting there who it looked like the phantoms had captured prisoner. he went over to the crow and untied a bunch of ropes that were binding him to his seat. " thank you kind sir! " croacked the crow. " no problem " said silver. " if there is anything I can do to repay your kindness please tell me"  he said. " well there is something you can do " said silver slowly. it was his only hope. " the phantoms captured my girl friend and I want to find her do you know where she is?" " yes " said the crow. " ok where" asked silver. "they brought her to the phantom bandlands you see". he said, "how do you know this" inquirded silver." becuse I over heard them talking about it they found me before I could get away and they were zapping me trying to fugure out how much I heard. they also had a map showing the best ways across the phantom badlands. I memorized it so it could help the alfas get across and stop the phantoms." "can you show me around the phantom badlands to help rescure her?" asked siilver holding his breath. " well " said the crow slowly. " you did help me escape from the phantoms so I will help you " " ok " said silver when do we leave?" "tommorrow" said the crow, " we need to get food to bring, they don't have very many plants and bushes with food on them so we would be lucky to find anything " ok " I will wait at lizas relaxation hotel for you be there tomorrow." silver left. the crow felt bad about what he was about to do but he had no choice...

ivy shot straght up. she did not remeber what had happened. but her memory came back after a minute or so. she got out of the raggy bed where she had been laying. she looked around. then one of the phantom guards noticed that she was awake. he called the evil black wolf the wolf came into the sell. hello ivy. ivy looked scared. who are you she asked? I am your knew boy friend. he said. NO! ivy said. yes. he said he gave her a kiss she did not like him and would not date him. what will happened? post your ideas in the comments down below. from now on if you comment on this story I will make a post on your wall when i finish the next one. and remember if you hurry you may win the jammaliday scarf. I hope you enjoyed. until we meet again.