Thread:Wildwinds/@comment-39615662-20190818043952

You requested I give you some advice on your story!

Soo here we go.

I'm not entirely sure what the story is about YET, as the story is short so far. I just think you should add a unique twist into the story that makes it yours. That's it for now because the story just started.

Also I'm gonna submit an OC! 