Talk:Apollo/@comment-37729082-20200130030126

Now the story is good, very good I was able to put alot of what's happening together. I read up to chapter six and I can say this is the next story that mustered a bit of emotion in me.. This is just my opinion to be frank and you don't have to rewrite the whole story... Red should get jailtime for abusing that officer, Juvie's doors are wide open.

I'm not saying she's a bad character, it's just that the He didn't really do anything wrong unless I'm reading it wrong, of course. Red got on my nerves there a bit but is she actually a detective ''or a kid playing some game? ''Now I'm not saying this to be mean or anything--I like the story so fat but if the officer did something really, really wrong..

GOSH,  poor guy, getting sand in his eye, I'll make an exception on hiatus judt to wrote something where he gets to live happily and whatnot if it's allowed but okay, before I just excessively write on this review-

This review is not meant to offend you, I, do not hate the story nor do I not like it, it's a good story, but was the officer right or is Red an actual detective?