Talk:The Next Generation/@comment-43836919-20200113231155

This is really good!

It has a few grammar mistakes, but it doesn't feel rushed or anything, and the plot is really nicely formed. This is a really neat story, and I look forward to more; it's not cliché with its deaths, mostly, and it's pretty hooking actually.

Good job! I wish you good luck with the rest of it, and I'll check in every once in a while.