Talk:Time Tickers 1: Rising Heat/@comment-40012429-20190930143547

3/5...

Could be a bit more intriguing and long, check out some of AbbyKurle's I believe that would help you a bit. I'm interested in your style, though, and I'm looking for the sequel! I'll work on some fanart just because. You could also elaborate more, the part where Tiger joined them was a bit confusing for me. But, yeah, good job!