User blog:Enddayss/Animatic Scene Writing

So its September 20th, meaning The Scareblog's demo is out for the rest of September, and then the fully fledged game on October 1st. I can't believe its the second time the Scareblog has appeared, with HBDK lurking in the corner. So I am making an animatic for my favorite character in this mess of characters, CBDK, with a new backstory.

The song listed here is "Bust Your Kneecaps" By Pomplamoose.

So first some excerpt from what happened to CBDK.

"Everything about him seemed beautiful, and now she had the courage to say 'I love you' to him, the only words that came back? 'You too'

''Unfortunately...nothing ever lasts forever. They got into a fight...well, you know the rest. Good news is that Iceglare's family was, itself, a bunch of hitmen, but you technically could call them a mafia. Only a few of them didn't have the best aim."''

So there is the explanation, so CBDK gets rejected by the one she loved most in life, whom seemed like her life at the time, and her family is a mafia, and she's got a big grudge against him. And then they shot her by accident.

So, I wrote for an animatic, and decided I'd post the writing here.

"Johnny, don't leave me. You said you'd love me forever."

CBDK, at that time, Iceglare, reaches out for a silhouette, who is apparently leaving.

"Honey 'believe' me, I'll have your heart on a platter!"

CBDK as...CBDK, is shown holding a platter with an anatomically accurate heart placed on it, with a tag wrapped around it, saying "Ochredawn", presenting it to a dragon with a large hole in its chest.

"Might you recall, we have a small family business..."

The showing of tall dragons with fedoras, standing in line, holding various guns, They are completely sillohuetted, save for circle eyes, completely colored in white, and wide, ear-to-ear grins. Iceglare is walking down the aisle of them. Grinning.

"And the family won't like this!"

She's the only one in the shot, holding a pistol, with swirling eyes in a hypnotic pattern. He's staring at the smoke drifting out of the pistol.

''"They'll bust your kneecaps! Oh, wop de doo, wop dee doo, da doo." (This happens twice.)''

Showing of the dragon, who's apparently "Ochredawn", having other dragons hitting him in the legs with crowbars and lead pipes, other weapons.

And that's all I got so far, but I got it planned out in my head.