Talk:The Sushi Miracles/@comment-27070860-20190716131403

You start off with five characters in the first paragraph, before throwing in two more and ooooofff I’m terrible with memorizing names so I would have appreciated that character chart at the beginning rather than somewhere in chapter two

That brings me to the point that if you where to continue this, I’d really like to see at least the main character be solidly established, since nothing really makes them different from the rest of the cast

Also, medical Jazz and ‘Yeow’ are my new life mottos, you can’t change that no matter how hard you may try

Also also, how dare you stop on a cliff hanger, you torturing son of a gun