Talk:Liza's killing madness/@comment-25566410-20141127161839

there is something wrong with this story in every sentence

You think that Liza is a cute little alpha but your wrong. -You're

I remembered her since the first time we saw her. - Thats sort of the point of remembering someone.

Do you know why liza is an evil alpha - She isn't, but go on

well when I started playing animal jam the clip about adventures was diffrent -What?

for some reason well it showed clips of Liza killing her own kind. -Who is her own kind? The animals? Alphas?

I was surprised how brutal it was. -Killing something will always be brutal

Then Liza said welcome to Jamma the place of blood you will learn how to kill those phantoms. -There is so much wrong with this.

I screamed WHAT! who would put this in a kids game then it went pitch black on the screen. -There was no reason to scream.

And then I became Liza and the instructions said kill all those stupid phantoms -You became Liza? I thought it was pitch black!

so when I saw a phantom Liza jumped into the sky and sliced the phantom into chunks -I thought you were Liza

then it said never ever come back to jamma -To who, you or the phantom

and then it just ends. Nothing else. No point to the story. 0/10

(This wiki needs a major cleanup. and fast)