Talk:The Phantom Slaves/@comment-30921738-20190130191459

Okay, there is a problem.....

A lot of the chapters are too short. Especially chapters 16 to 24, they are all super short chapters that are barely a paragraph long. I think you could merge a lot of the chapters, because you already have plenty of detail and it would be boring if you added too much detail. When the parts of the Hybrid say goodbye, you could just have several blank spaces between, because those chapters are fairly short and could be merged.