How To Write A (Good) Story

Type One - Creepypastas
Ah, a Creepypasta. For some, it brings chills. For others...well,

* vomits*

Here are some tips to go from drab to fab on your Creepypasta.

Cliches
Here are some of the most commonly used 'pasta themes, or "cliches". I'm not saying these can't be twisted into a good story, but...read these short stories. Which do you like better?
 * Hackers
 * IRL death
 * Animal death
 * Hackers coming IRL to kill you
 * Being a scammer
 * ^ and having anyone/Alphas kill your account
 * ^ or you
 * News Flashes of the main character being dead

"I once scammed people, I was really rare, but one day I logged on and saw the Alphas with my animal. "You will pay," Peck said and killed my animal. I turned around, and I was killed."

"I used to scam. Used to. But now I know better. I used to scam for rares, spikes, hds--I was RARE. The next day when I logged on, I saw the animated Peck and my animal in a dark abyss. My animal said, "Please end the torture.", even though I typed nothing. I heard this come out of my speakers, "You are leaving Animal Jam! Population: -You."

I'm guessing you might've liked the second one. Now, what name would you give both? Here are some examples:

Story One Story Two That's all I got for now! Comment below with questions!
 * 1) Karma
 * 2) You Will Pay
 * 3) Never Scam
 * 1) Karma (yeah, it fits both)
 * 2) -You
 * 3) Population: -You
 * 4) end the torture
 * 5) Don't Scam