Talk:The horror/@comment-25471008-20150710063740/@comment-31417255-20180624001517

A laceration isn't just any wound, it is a deep cut or tear to the skin or flesh.

I like your use of most of these words, but "vital fluid" is too excessive and makes it look like you're trying to hard.

Don't use words because they're "fancy" or "big", use them because they help you to better portray the events in your story by making them more detailed.

Here is an example:

''The large cut on Tim's leg bled a lot. Tim screamed in pain as the blood came out. --> The laceration on Tim's thigh bled profusely. Tim screamed in agony as the fresh, warm blood continued to pour out of his body, drenching his entire left leg.''