Talk:The slaves/@comment-27503421-20170112221803

Good job I like the plot but maybe read over your work incase of spellibg errors.

7/10

grammatical errors (I wanted to correct I am trying to offend in way shape or form) ok i said = "Ok" I said like well will that said a wolf ya then rest of = "we like what we will do" A wolf barked "Ya!" Shouted the rest also I is always a capital if alone