Thread:Melonbuns/@comment-39515848-20190827055832

Hi Melon! Your story is good. Rex's age doesn't matter the entire story. For next chapters, you can add some child-like behaviors to Rex. Do you know Kafa who be soldier at 10?

Thats OK if you want him to be child army. But, when the battle start he would not be in infantry or cavalery (too dangerous for 12 years old!). He will be archer or strategist/tactician.

For current chapter about training, I think your military training is suitable for 12 years old.

Thank you! 