Talk:Shooting Stars/@comment-27070860-20180516193228

This is nice, I enjoyed the overall plot, but there’s a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes- I’d recommend re-reading your work a few times before every edit. I’d definitely recommend you write this in word or some other program that’ll check spelling/grammar for you. It’ll make your life a whole lot easier, and your stories more enjoyable to read.

Everything else is fine, I really enjoy war-themed stories, so I’ll be looking forward to more.

Good luck with the rest of the story~