Talk:The Story Of Miss Clevergem/@comment-28284319-20140616075238

3/10

I can honestly say I was.....Disappointed by this story.

You had a good plot, but you failed to execute it correctly. If you don't like constructive criticism, I suggest you don't read this. You didn't have proper grammar in some places, and you don't use 'as' for first person when describing yourself. Just some constructive criticism, please keep this in mind for future chapters! :)