Talk:Unveiling The Plot (It Was Bigger Than We Expected)/@comment-27070860-20190510155036

I enjoyed reading this, I think it’ s off to a great start! I really liked the amount of detail you put into the first couple chapters, as well as your writing style- though the very short chapters (I-III) did throw me out of the rhythm a bit. They seem to flow pretty well together, so I’ m not really sure why there was a need to cut up the river scene into three pieces.

Nonetheless, good luck with writing the next chapters~!