Talk:ORANGE SPIKES... ORANGE SPIKES.../@comment-29963882-20180105225950/@comment-32808457-20180106190301

Thanks! So on the blood part, I'll fix it up a bit. I feel as if it may ruin it eventually (not sure why..) each time I read over it.

On the descriptive part, I've mostly been rushing it, and soon I'll stop rushing and go back to work on it. I've been reading it differently then I typed it, which imo makes it sound better (a few times a bit more descriptive), so whenever I do add it in and stop rushing, it may seem better. :3