Talk:The Ever Maze/@comment-32492996-20180912020808

Very good so far, and there is an EXTREME amoutn of potential here for an AMAZING, JAW-DROPPING story.

This is excellent for your first story, but I hvae one suggestion on grammar. (I'm so sorry, I always correct grammar, even if it's already correct and I'm wrong, I still try to correct it)

When dialogue starts, it's usually considered a new paragragh, except for when it says "She made her usual 'Purrr' sound...", but only because the sentence was refering to multiple times it had been said, and because it was not dialogue as in the cat was speaking words out loud.

So yeah, a simple enter before the dialogue, and this is me trying to be as nitpicky as I can.

You seem like a good writer, and this seems like a good story so far.

Keep up the good work!