Talk:Broken Promises - Creepypasta/@comment-31417255-20180609090123

Please try to practice more on your drawing and editing, especially the drawing. I can't tell what the animal in your drawing is supposed to be. Is it a Kai Ken? A tabby cat? A mammal-reptile hybrid? I can't tell. The shadows in the background look okay for scary creatures, but not for shadows that are meant to look like normal animals. Lastly, please don't continue trying to draw with a mouse. It will always end up looking like crap unless you're a very experienced artist. You should try drawing on paper instead and scanning it (you don't need to color it unless you want to).