Talk:Softest Sea/@comment-36740261-20191112015353

I like it so far! Although, I suggest before jumping straight to the action, introduce the main character, Cherry, for about 2 chapters. In those 2 chapters, you can put some rising action. Then it's okay to jump into the action. I also suggest writing a prologue for a chapter book, but you don't have to if you can't think of a backstory important to the story. The first chapter is a bit short, but it's not a big deal at all.

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