Talk:Empty Servers/@comment-25969924-20150217134939

A few tips if this is your first:

1,Try to use more commas next time.

2,Try to not use cliches as the alphas died, or red (or black) eyes.

3, When you say you saw 'scary' images, tell us what you saw! It makes the potential in the stories escape to Nopeville.

These are only SOME tips, as the story was a bit short.