Talk:I'll have some soup with that, please ~ AJ Creepypasta/@comment-31040477-20160128131327

Make sure to put a period between the sentences "She shrieked in pain as she was mutilated and dismembered alive" and "pain shot through her tail as it were being ripped off" also, I suggest at the end putting "Before her last breath slipped out of her muzzle, she heard a wisper close to her ear"