Thread:Butterflyunicorn/@comment-31191359-20181214073418

Hello, I need help for beta testing again, for this game is very expermental, and tries alot of new things, and im in severe need of feedback. Feel free to deny my request, and please leave unbiased feedback. Please tell me what I can fix.

Now, the soundtrack is here. It will be filled in as the game progresses.

CREDITS- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eUMc2E_ABhQ

FLASHBACKS- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQG4_60-waU

PRE-GAME- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6iRlvzo54k

COUPLE KILLING- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1R0AUyvNc4Y

DURING RIVER FALL- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ALYdEgbv94c

THE REVERSE WORLD: INTRODUCTION- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMVZg7q9ueI

MEETING REMEMBERED (NEGLECT PLAYTHROUGH)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_plj8zcncA

ENDING- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVHcH0DGaY4

The core concept is a kind of tim-burton don't starve feeling, mixed with an old game I used to play called Limbo, Here's a screenshot.

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Some inspiration came from watching Tim Burton's "Coraline" in the dark, which left my mind racing and dancing, soon, I had the concept. I googled a ton of art from Tim Burton, and took note of the style. The way it was...to me, was beautiful, the gothic   look really was glorious.

The next day, I put the concept, and thread games together.

You play as a pre-made character, and cannot make your own, though, you can modify the personality, but the past and appearance is the same. While it may seem odd, it's experimental, may I remind you. His name is Neglect, and he's a criminal on the run, he feels extreme guilt for what he did, which was two murders for a place to live, and giving a child to an orphanage.

So he stays in the forest, and while eating his lunch, a dead bunny, he falls into a river, and is carried to a cave full of photoluminescent insects floating in the air, they looked like stars in a dark night. After a while of exploring, he finds a pond, and looks at his reflection in it, seeing a white wolf with black tearing eyes, and he was a black wolf with white tearing eyes, a white tear fell into the pond, and a black fluid dropped up from the lake, before falling back in. He reached into the pond, and...

He got pulled in.

He fell into the reverse world, titled the Land of the Mortuus, the land you enter upon death, and soon, he met his reversed version, Remember, nobody else seems to have a reverse version.

A good amount of the game revolves around the relationship between Neglect and Remember, but there's a wide variety of story that Neglect and Remember power through together, bound together by a string of color, things so powerful that no mortal can break them, If your relationship changes, i'll let you know. Everything you do matters, and nothing has no consequences, namely the main antagonist sees all, and will use every negative thing you do as an advantage.

This has no time limit, and an ending that highly depends on what you do, one action can throw you off from a good ending. This entire game is namely based off artsy stuff and Don't Starve.

Im drawing official art soon. 