Talk:Animal Jam: The Lost Adventure/@comment-31473471-20191029214940

Hello there! We've met before but I have some tips and advice for you. 1) Double check your spelling. Reaper is one word off from a criminal so yeah. 2) Show don't tell. Basically it means that describe the thing in detail like instead of 'it was so graphic. I was so scared.' you could write 'it was soaked with crimson, pools of the colour danced in splatters around the page. The more I consumed this sight, the greater I felt on edge. 3)Check your grammar too.

Hopefully these will help!