Thread:Youngcoldnew17/@comment-43836919-20191218230945/@comment-39191802-20191219005139

Hi there! I saw that story earlier, and it's pretty good so far!

But is there any particular reason why they're keeping Flit in the fortress, or is that to be revealed later?

Also, in the paragraph about the mist, it reads 'with it's mist'

It's is a contraction of 'it is', its means 'belonging to it'.

Other than that, the story is great! I can't wait to see more of it.