Talk:Fire In A Heart/@comment-27070860-20170820142648

I'm a bit confused about the parts writen in the parenthesis, but isn't that just the beauty of it?

Good job so far by the way- got me interested already.

(my only problem (this is a personal thing, there's nothing wrong with the story) is the '2nd' soul. I've grown so used to reading 'second' and never seeing '2nd' that it's just bothering me e,e)

Anyways good luck with the rest of the story~