Talk:The White long - creepypasta AJ/@comment-31417255-20180804135948/@comment-35531815-20180804143341

Most stories involve characters in doing such a thing. Gives an affect of some sort.

Eh, all I know is that most people do this. Probably for a affect it is to be given to the reader or it's some ghost telling it. Either way, if you would say your opinion better, then I think they could improve. I usually don't like reading creepypastas because most are basically the same concept, and this is a example. The narrator being dead and telling the story isn't much of a surprise to me. Again, you see it in most stories.

Though I doubt she's telling it. Or, I'm reading it wrong. "This is some Jammer's experience you're going to hear right now." This does not mean the exact main character is telling it. Could be someone else. Sure, it's first person point of veiw, but that does not mean they are the exact person telling it. You see how it doesn't say "This is my experience you're going to hear right now."?

Then again, it could be the ghost of them not wanting to mention that they were the one. Anyway, I must be looking into this too much. The story does have some mistakes, but it's not terrible. It's not those creepypastas that goes with some character being bullied till they're insane, hacks aj and kills everybody animals. Or something like that. Heh, probably nothing like it. I was about to compare it to those creepypasta fanfics where they fall in love with jeff, but then again it wouldn't make any sense.

Anywho, I looked into this too much. Have a nice day.