Talk:Black Hearts/@comment-31304979-20160606060130/@comment-27388317-20160613200919

Mhm, I love the ideas of making the leopard of making a misunderstood character, I might do that. Also I'm not the type of person to start with bloodshed on stories so the scenes that might freak young children aren't in the story yet.

I hope you have a good day :D And I may change some things and there because of the ideas. I always like a good critisism.