Talk:Stolid/@comment-39615662-20191006192141

AGHHH I LOVE THE WAY YOU FINISHED EVERYTHING OFF

I love the way 'Stolid' kinda narrates the story in his own way, it makes the story unique and memorable. I love the way he uses exclamation marks to talk about things that excite him. I, personally, never use exclamation marks in my writing except for dialogue. I love the fact you made him use exclamation marks.

And the story itself- I mean, like, wow. This is longer than many published novels, and better than many too. I've been thinking about reading the Twilight Saga, but I'd read one of your stories any day. everything ties off so so so perfectly, and its just brilliant. you're brilliant. my homie stolid is brilliant. stolid's personality is so real and believable and i just can't express my thoughts in words. when i see this story has been updated, my stomach tightens and the corners of my mouth slight into a small smirk. it's the feeling i get when i'm about to ride a rollercoaster. and, yes, this is one heck of a ride, and i love it. never stop writing. i wanna say you'll keep improving, but ayayay i don't even know how anyone could improve this. you're amazing. and i don't care if you think you're not, because you are and i know it and i'm right and you have the potential to be an insanely famous writer. you could make a living off of writing, not gonna lie.

i'm not saying to devote your life to writing based on some person on the internet's thoughts, but hey, it's an idea. though, do what you wanna do. but no matter what, you better keep writing at least as a time killer. your ideas are sensational and i feel that you could write about almost anything. but, for your work to be at its peak, make sure its something you feel passionate about. i'm guessing you feel passionate about this, and i can't blame you because this is the most enthusiastic i've ever felt towards a story.

waiting to see more of your writing, my dude.