Thread:Cyk3s0wl/@comment-27503421-20160101085357/@comment-27457106-20160101141807

Okay, I'm just going to tell you what I edited and probably will edit. This could also be a reference for the future when writing!

Capitalization: You usually don't capitalize random words in the middle of a sentence. (Ex: I Ran as Fast as I could. Just keep "I" capitalized.) And capitalize character's names, such as Lucky, Speedy, Mabel, and Dipper. Also, always capitalize the first letter in a sentence and the word I. You as the narrator are extremely important in the story!

Words That Don't Make Sense: I cant think of a lot of this in the story, but just dont make sentences that are confusing to thr reader.

Puntuation: I saw a lot of this, but its fine. Remember: add periods to the end of every sentence! If a sentece is trying to exclaim something, use an exclamation point (!). If a sentence is asking a question, then use a question mark (?). I learned all five comma rules (which are beyond too confusing for lots of people), so I'll do any comma stuff.

Talking: When a character speaks, make a new paragraph. (Here's an example:

"Oh, hey!" She said.

"It's super nice to see you again." He said.") I did a lot of this on your stories, so sorry if they seem long.

And...that's it! If I find anything else, I'll tell you!

Tཽhཽeཽ lཽaཽsཽtཽ eཽnཽeཽmཽyཽ tཽoཽ bཽeཽ dཽeཽsཽtཽrཽoཽyཽeཽdཽ iཽsཽ dཽeཽaཽtཽhཽ ⭐️ (talk) 14:18, January 1, 2016 (UTC)