Talk:How Snowflake Shylily became a Octowolf/@comment-11573350-20140206215934

This is nice, but it's not formatted correctly and you have quite a few grammar mistakes.

You have a giant lump of text. You need to seperate it into paragraphs, and space out the quotes.

Like this:

"Uhh guys do you know how to cover these things?" Snowflake Shylily showed her chestfur where some tiny octopus tentacles grew.

Greely said "Unusual for a normal wolf,well what were your parents?"