Thread:I aM OoOoF/@comment-44852177-20200114122927/@comment-38113021-20200114230342

Alrighty.

I read the story, way better then my first.

I guess it is a little bit confusing. I didn't understand how the arctic wolf saved the world or what happened to her. Maybe in the beginnning you could have a section about her and explain it, kind of like a prologue, along with a explaining a bit more about the humans and animals. I would reread your story a few times to fix a bit of the confusion.

Now just rember that these are sugesstions that you asked for, and you don't have to do anything I say. This is just my opinion, and you don't have to bealive it.