Talk:The ice - Animal Jam Creepypasta/@comment-31417255-20180612030102/@comment-30921738-20180701182614

You don't have to sugarcoat things, but you don't have to be so rude. Tell them what they need to work on, don't just yell at them and tell them how stupid their stories are because it won't change anything. If you can't say anything without being rude, then it is best to not say anything at all.

After all, this is their first story, of course it isn't going to be the best thing you've ever seen! If you don't want them to make more 'crappy' stories, then tell them what they need to work on. Saying rude insults won't make anything better, it won't change a single thing.