Talk:Unveiling The Plot (It Was Bigger Than We Expected)/@comment-27070860-20190510155036/@comment-32657625-20190511231258

Ahh, thank you, that means quite a bit to me! :) I mainly broke that up because I stopped writing for a while after Chapter I was done, and I felt like I needed to for Chapters II and III because of the slight time-jump. I see what you mean, though, it would flow nicely without the breaks. I'm hoping to put more detail into the next chapters... is it just me, or was Chapter V not as good? Nonetheless, I'm very glad that you enjoy it, and I hope to write more soon!