Talk:Bearwolfalmighty The Killer/@comment-30921738-20190122011457

This needs a lot of work. There isn't that much detail and you have no idea who Bearwolfalmighty is, and you didn't feel bad for the characters who died because you know nothing about them. It's also not even a surprise that they are going to die because you know what is going to happen to them. You also don't know how Bear found them, most of them you don't know why he killed them.