Talk:Mira and the 7 Souls - An AJ Creepypasta/@comment-28439145-20170611184944

This is great pasta, but can I fix it up a bit? It has a few errors (sorry, I just can't stand comma errors XD). I really like how this isn't like other creepypastas, where when it starts off you KNOW it's going to be generic. It feels like it started out as a normal aj story, then something came in and ruined it, not the usual starting out creepyish and ending creepy. I really enjoyed this, it's one of the better wiki pastas.