User blog comment:Ilovepandasforreals/Online dating story/@comment-30921738-20180502213504

Wow! This is actually a really good story, wasn't expecting the evil black wolf to come along. It's a very unique story.

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I think Silver should follow Ivy and the phantoms to the badlands, where he meets a new animal (such as a snake, iguana, crow, or jaguar) and steals the phantom king's magic and breaks Ivy out of prison