Thread:Abbykurle/@comment-36740261-20191125224108/@comment-30921738-20191126000829

OH NO NO NO IT'S FINE

I just thought my parents wouldn't be fine with it

But uh I wanted to mention a few things, constructive critisism:

1: I noticed that when you do highlights on your drawings, the light goes out over the area that was highlighted. Not a very big problem, but I was wondering if FireAlpaca has a selection tool. If so, select the area you ant and then do the highlights, and nothing will go outside of the selection. It's super helpful when doing shading and highlights.

2: You don't need to add that much detail to your chapter. It's fine if you want it keep it, I just don't want to pressure you into adding a ton of detail to things that don't do it. If your trying to make violet like someone who plans everything out and is very precise in waht she does, the  you captured that perfectly. Otherwise, you can just rid of some of the unnecessary details about how she made her breakfast.

None of this is itnended to be rude, just trying to help :D