Talk:Rose Leaf/@comment-27070860-20171110193011

I like it so far; your writing is good and I'm going to be looking forward to more~

I absolutely love stories that have anything to do with tribes and kingdoms, so I think I'll be enjoying this as it continues

The only thing I'm not a fan of is that straight from the beginning the main character announced themselves as dead- I would have liked to see the story tell that itself rather than it being thrown in like that, but who knows, maybe you'll surprise me with a twist of some sort (this isn't something bad or wrong, I just would rather it surprise me later on in the story)

Other than that, I think this has lots of potential to be a good story (from what I see in the comments, you've got yourself a bunch of people who can't wait for more, and have high expectations for this- I hope Rose Leaf lives up to them).

Good luck with the story~

(I just realised how long this comment is compared to the others)

(I'll just shut up)

(Have fun writing this, I'll be followin' it)