Talk:Second Child, Restless Child/@comment-27070860-20191026094109

From the short synopsis of a wingless kid trying to fly, to a school of stars and planets, new shapes, painted fur and cracked walls, I loved every second of it thus far- the fact that you included a lot of star & space talk didn’t help at all because I find it so fascinating and intriguing and I can’t wait to read more of it- (on another note have you ever read McDevitt’s ‘The Engines of God’? It’s truly amazing, I think I may have even had a mini-breakdown over how fleshed out and how enormous he managed to make the universe and time itself feel)

Anyways I really felt that ‘you need to relax’ part, seriously, try doing anything properly with stiff shoulders and jerky fingers- its impossible, good on Mother Falcon for learning how

Also, so far all of the characters have stole my heart (of course, my favourite being Zephyros) and right now I’m just looking forward to seeing the gorgeous falcon finally spread its wings and soar once more

(I’d say good luck with the story, but any more of that and you’ll get too powerful)