User blog:Youngcoldnew17/Greely isn't a good narrator either!

It occured to me that 1st person stories are a little rare on here.

Now I see why.

In my latest story, The Clandestine Cloak, Liza was originally going to be my narrator. The Clandestine Cloak is supposed to be a new take on Greely's past, an overused subject that could use a twist.

Then, I thought, "This is Greely's story, why not make him the narrator?" So I deleted my progress and started fresh, Liza wasn't going well anyway.

Despite teaching me writing skills and grammar (and making stoic characters), Greely isn't a good 1st person narrator either, as he would most naturally hide most of the information from the reader. Plus, I'm not good at writing emotions from 1st person anyway, so Greely, being quite stoic, would make it even harder.

I probably couldn't make any of the alphas narrators either.

Sir Gilbert- Polar opposite character, he wouldn't care anyway.

Graham- Is probably one of the most skeptical of Greely.

Cosmo- I actually don't have a reason not to, but he wouldn't be a comfortable narrator, and wouldn't know this anyways.

Peck- For obvious reasons.

I don't know what else to do but to pester everyone with my random problem =]