User blog comment:Safetystoryluv/Uhm/@comment-27600777-20191020044432

To get attention on your stories, you first have to make them, well, readable. Which means no huge blocks of text. Seperate whenever there's a new:

-Time

-Person speaking

-Location

Also, like MelonVandal said, a good title can catch a reader's eye and give you more views, but people still won't give you feedback unless your story has some kind of hook. A cliffhanger ending chapter gets people theorizing in the comments, and of course, good grammar and spelling go a long way to making your story more readable and entertaining.

Interactive stories, like one's with OCs, choose-your-own-adventures, and mysteries, also get more comments because people can theorize, talk, and share their ideas with other people in the comments.

Update your story frequently to get it seen in the recently updated section, and perhaps at the end of your story, put a note saying something to the effect of:

"Show me your thoughts or theories in the comments! I love hearing about what you guys think" or something like that!

PHEW, that was a lot. essay's over now, lmao. hope this helps!