Thread:Youngcoldnew17/@comment-39191802-20191116015800

The protagonist was originally supposed to be an old wolf who ranted and complained about 'what the children of jamaa were believing these days' or the new lore. He is later in the story revealed to have almost become the wolf alpha, and he thus has a small grudge concerning Greely.

I then thought: "That is very lacking in plot. Although it was an interesting concept, I felt it needed a bit more action.

So I changed it a bit.

I chose a different protagonist, and began to draft. Graham is once more honorable but very old, Greely and Sir Gilbert are long gone, Liza makes no appearance, nor does peck.

I made the old wolf one of Akhil's teachers. He will later in the plot give Akhil some important advice about being the next alpha.

wip 