The Alphas' Quest

7 years ago i wrote an animal jam fanfiction. i was 6 years old. here it is, uncut and unabridged. the things in brackets are my own terrified comments

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so just if you don't know what this is, it is a storybook/notebook [THIS IS CROSSED OUT VIOLENTLY WITH "STORY" SQUEEZED ABOVE IT] (I KNOW that isn't a word). [THIS IS ALSO CROSSED OUT VIOLENTLY] Well, anyway, The next page will begen a ["A" IS CROSSED OUT WITH "THE" ABOVE IT] story. It's called Q uest of the ALPha s, and i Really don't feel Like filling up this page right now so -- [REST OF PAGE'S SPACES ARE FILLED WITH A CONSECUTIVE LINE]

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Cosmo, the koala Alpha, just returned to his house With chomperseeds, honey, and Nectar When liza the panda alpha came running. She was with greely, the wolf Alpha. cosmo noticed that The crystal on The top of liza's staff That was usua lly purple was half black and had a black crown on the top. AndPeck the bunny Alpha noted that she was on Greely 's head. Greely threw Peck off of him. "I still Wish I could eat you;" Growled Greely. he was in a bad mood.

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"Um, So, Why are you here?" asked Cosmo. "I was about to make some boomseeds." a Sudden roar Was heard by the Alphas. Sir Gilbert the tiger Alpha and also leader of the alpha s dropped down from a tree. he was with The Girrafe alpha, edmund, The rhino Alpha, ruby, and the elephant Alpha, Otto. "A lot of Alphas." Said Edmund. "dont push it." growled Greely. Cosmo began again. "So, anyway, Why are You Guys here?" Said Cosmo. Liza almos fell down, she was weak. Sir Gilbert and Greely helped her up. The black crystals shone like darkness.



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"Well, Said Peck, "We are here because... well..." "OH, JUST SAY IT!!" growled greely. "Hey! I was Hesitant! Let me finish!" shouted Peck. "OK where was I before I was RUDELY INTERUPTED (she glared at greely)? Oh, yes! Um, um, uh... UMMM...." "PECK!" "Okay!" just let liza explain it!!!" liza rose. "We are here because Isaw 4 bunnies in purple cages." she said. "WHAT!?" Edmund screamed. "WE were here because all The rhinos, elephants, and giraffes were missing." "allof The m?" asked graham, The monkey alpha, who had just came because he started to appearfrom The bush.

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[my first three, very awful aj ocs are introduced]

"Well, yes, exept for two giraffes

." [i legit put the period and quotation mark at the next line when i ran out of room] "which ones?" "well, me and tech." "Whos that?" asked Peck. "Well, instead of hooves, he has robotic fingers, and he makes stuff out of... uh... oh yeah. flagstone. and he went goofing off somewhere." "ah." said peck. then all of a sudden a piece of flagstone with a sword shape in The middle came flying out of nowhere. Followed by "NO! NO. NO. NO. NO. NO!" "hey, at least you got a billion more," said a voice. "SHUT UP!" screamed another. Tis was followed by a seal being flinged [???] out of a bush. and a fox. Then a giraffe Jumped ouT. "Edmund, we can deal With the giraffe Slash elephant slash rhino problem later!" he said. "Tech, fine.. but we need theo ther alphas!" said edmund. Tech picked up his piece of flagstone. The he cut the sword out with his robotic fin gers on razor mode. "I'm gonna handle those black ghosts like ZIos would have! Yah! Woh! Ooh! Eeh!" he swung The swo

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rd all around. "Waiiit," said the fox. "you think It's ... Them?" "duh, julian. who else would put bunnies in purple, nerdy cages?" [???] demanded Tech. julian got up. "ring ding ding ding ding ding ding, I'm going to lose my mind." he said. "Clearly the phantoms have returned." Said the seal. he got up. The seal, named DJ, was one of tech's frie nds. The youngest. "frakkack ack kaka ka ka kow," said julian. "I wish we could go back to pepper srings, but NOOO, WE have TO DEAL WITH THE STUPID PHANTOMS!!" Pepper springs or The pond of speed, only let people who were born There drink from it (the only people so far was tech, who was born in The summer and frozo (we'll get to him later) Who was born in The winter.) and when they did it would grant them a power of speed. tech and frozo are deieties. so they unlocked their swapping power. [ignore this part ignore it i dont even want to talk about it just ignore it]

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"Okay," said julian, "Let's get the one eyed spiders!"

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"Whew! how long do we have to walk?" Complained tech very wearily.

"We're here," said Sir Gilbert. Graham edmund, ruby, and otto had stayed to help liza. Greely, Peck, Sir Gilbert, julian, DJ and tech remained. "Ok," said Sir Gilbert. "DJ, julian and tech will be in a group. Me, Greely and Peck will be in a gro--" Sir Gilbert stopped. "What are you three doing In there?" he demanded. Tech,

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julian, and DJ were in somebushes near the trees. "legend says that there is a chest over here," said tech. he threw out a chest. "fine. we'll go for the corks, and you guys do the chests after we getthe corks," said Sir Gilbert. "GO, GO, GO!" Peck scrambled under The vines. Greely teleported  TO the other side and sir Gilbert just walked under them. "I really don't know what's wrong with you two today." he said. tech was busy throwing out chests from the bush. they came into the villages. "Our CROPS won't Grow because of the phantoms!" said a bunny named buster.



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another bunny named pumpkin said, "I found t

his cork, but I can't reach the pipe. Can you help me?" "Sure," said Peck. She grabbed the pipe's mouth, bent it down and stuffed the cork in. tech unloaded The chests from the bushes.



they continued on and then a phantom jumped out of the bush holding Julian in his tentacles. The phantom put him in a deep sleep with his sock. A huge wave of anger went across Tech. Steam blew out of his snout. He brushed his mechanical paw on the ground and charged straight toward the phantom. they tried to stop him, but It was no use. He was going at full speed now! DJ chased after him. Tech bucked when Dj held onto him. Then Tech

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grabbed a chest and bucked it with his back legs. It hit the phantom in the face and sent him flying intoa chomper plant. "Yum," said the chomper. Julian respawned Under the floating Zios beam.



they con tinued on When Julian woke up. they Plugged the corks until the poll-

ution lifted on the river and waterfall. they had to water the polu-

ted plants with well water and the-

n battle phantoms. [way to skimp on the details 6 year old me] tech went in to The hamlet again [??????], and went into The burrow toget the Phantom door key. He got It and swam In The river

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to take the shortcut. "What took you so long?" asked Peck. "Those bunnies in the burrow wouldn't let me leave. They tred slicing off the mechanicals and put me in this huge pot. I think They're cannibals," said tech. [wtf] Greely snatched the key and Jammed it in. [and nobody cares that he almost died] [dont worry guys he wouldve respawned under the famed zios beam]

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As They walked in, Techgrabed a chomper plant and Sheilded himself with it. Then he dived on a phantom and the chomper plant ate it. Greely teleported to a key and found the bunnies in cages. He unlocked The cage and waited. Tech came running With the other key and unlocked another cage. Sir Gilbert ate some phantoms, [wtf again] got aKey and so did julian and unlocked the remaining cages. When The bunnies hurried home and they started to head back to Cosmo's house, Tech heard a vice. "Let go of me! Stop it!" Then he saw a winter blue fox with clover-colored eyes being dragged by phantoms. The second he saw That fox he was about to fall over and die. He managed to brace himself. if you could see Tech's thoughts, there would be hearts, nothing but hearts. "We have to save her." declared Tech. "do we HAVE to??" said DJ. Tech gave him an absolutely wild and bewildered look. "Oh, I see," Said DJ. "Fine, fine," said Sir Gilbert. [why would he be against saving her in the first place he's an alpha] They snuck around and followed the phant-

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oms dragging her. "Now," said Sir Gilbert "Before we go out there We have to come up with a p--" "YAAARGH!" screamed tech wildly and went flying onto the phantoms. he kept flinging them into chompers like they were nothing. When he was done, the fox said, "thank you so much," and then she gave info of why she was in bunny burrow. "my friends lily, delilah and cake are trapped in apla-

ce called The hive," said The Fox. "A mysterious fellow is planning to keep delilah all his own and dispose cake and lily." [wtf does that mean??? wtf??? hello??? 6 year old me??? hello???] everyone listened very closely. "My name is sul-

phur. Let's get going!"

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The team ran back to Cosmo's den and packed. "I Know The way," said Sulphur. The closest way is to cut through ash ortcut." So they walked and talked until they found a large batch of bamboo.



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they cut through a patch of bamboo into Mt. Shiveer. "I'm Shivering," complained Peck. "My bags are heavy and im starvving." Suddenly a whiz of silver, um, whizzed over their heads. Then came



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a flash of frosty blue. "that dang bangarang is destructing their lives, once it explodes -- BAM!" [godddd nononononononnono please not no no nono i know what comes next nonononononono]



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Something exploded, a artic wolf in ice armor came out of the blue flash. The yellow came back to a yellow cheetah. "bang bang bangarang [the rest is unintelligible]" sang the cheetah. "Um, hi. I'm frozo, and this is Kuno. he carries his bangarang everywhere," said the artic wolf (see? I TOLD you we'd get to him!) "What's a bangarang?" asked Peck. "Can't tell you," said Kuno. "Where y'goin?" "The ohantom portal!" said Sulphur. "Paadee and delilah escaped from haughty tyrant in the hive, the phantom king," said Kuno mysteriously. "If the phantom portal is what y'all's lookin' for, Then this-a-way!"

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after gathering a cork x 4, Kuno and Frozo used their bangarangs [WHAT THE HELL. WHAT THE HELL. PLEASE STOP IT IM BEGGING YOU] to summon a cyborg wolf, K9. K9 smashed through the door and found monkeys trapped in cages. "AAAH! AAAH! AHHH!" screamed the monkeys louder and louder. greely teleported into everyone of their cages and slashed slices so deep you could see through their bodies.



"There!" he growled. "No more monkeys." DJ backed away. There were still gems in the cages. greely took care of that. "You have no sense of adventure," said Peck.

[and it just ends like that. i never finished it. its comedy gold and i never finished it. smash the like button and i may continue and end it for the giggles]