Talk:"If you like me, come to my den" - AJ Creepypasta/@comment-26031881-20150123062122

I give it a 6/10 because the ending seemed like you were getting bored and you made up a quick ending. Although I liked that the Ultimate Chimera told Twinkle to wear her AJ T-shirt because it seemed like a nice part that sort of stands out from the rest of the words.