Thread:Abbykurle/@comment-37352765-20190220185828/@comment-30921738-20190221184156

When they were talking about getting Wootmoo, Wisteria freaked out and didn't want them to for some reason that I didn't understand. And why were Liza and Gilbert martyred? I also have no idea what the Calypso was, that might need an explanation. I'm also now sure what the Alpha Paladins are.

What I would do to make it less confusing would add a quick explanation, that maybe one of the characters was thinking of. An example:

""The Calypso would have literally swallowed Jamaa in one bite! He saved us from our annihilation!" says Duchess. There was no doubt that she was thinking about the time that the Calypso, a beast created by the phantoms, would have destroyed Jamaa if it weren't for Aparri."

It's okay to purposely leave out bits of information to keep up the suspense, but make it seem as though those answeres will be answered later on.