Talk:Rise of The Elements/@comment-38393659-20190622032103

I will just let you know that chapters 11 and 12 are a bit too much on the adrenaline thing. I don't believe even if I was Mira I'd use my adrenaline for 1 and a half chapters. And the kidnapping. And the fact that they literally focus on either an Elemental or escaping. Other than that the newer part of the story is well done.