Talk:Below the basement/@comment-27070860-20171008190935

Interesting story- I liked the idea about the basement and all the skeletons, but I felt as if the ending might have been a bit too simple- there was nothing bad about it, but there wasn't anything outstanding either. Overall, I enjoyed it ^^

Also, there's a small mistake- "I ignored them and descended the ladder." I think you mean 'and descended down the ladder'.

There's also a few errors here and there, I'd recommend writing your story in word or some other program that will check the spelling and grammar for you- it helps a lot ^^

Good luck on any future stories~