Talk:Forged/@comment-30921738-20170223002713

I noticed something. In the story it said:

"What can I get ya?" The waitress asked gruffly, her furry snow leopard tail swaying as he looked at Fuzzy.

You said the waitress was a she, then you said it was a he.

Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude, just letting you know.

Also, the part where Proto died made me almost cry out loud 3: