Talk:Curse of Phantom Lake/@comment-36740261-20190420034637

I like the story so far, but the first chapter is WAY WAY WAY too short. If you're aiming to make a long story, I suggest a range of 900-1500 words per chapter. Also, if you're about to make a new chapter, use headings instead of just text.

And also, for the "There is lake hidden deep within Sarepia Forest. This lake is called Phantom Lake. Phantom Lake was once beautiful and tranquil until the day came for big innovations, A Panda wanted to build a hotel right by the lake. The lake was originally named after Mira, Skymother. Mira's lake attracted all kinds of animals, such as Loons, Deer, Ducks, Geese, Frogs, and other freshwater animals.", tell the reader it is a prologue by making a heading above the text saying "Prologue"

Here is an example:

Prologue
There is lake hidden deep within Sarepia Forest. This lake is called Phantom Lake.

Phantom Lake was once beautiful and tranquil until the day came for big innovations, A Panda wanted to build a hotel right by the lake. The lake was originally named after Mira, Skymother. Mira's lake attracted all kinds of animals, such as Loons, Deer, Ducks, Geese, Frogs, and other freshwater animals.

I'm excited to see more though!