Talk:The Secret Room (Sarepia Forest) BLOOD WARNING/@comment-25948785-20150101183048

A suggestion, you should capitalize stuff when you need to. Like "Normal Day" shouldn't be capitalized. Also, 'your' is much more different than you're. When they say,"Your the only one...", it should be "You're or you are."

Sorry about that, but this story doesn't have the best grammar.

I would give it a 6/10. It sounds a bit cliched to me. But that's just me.