Talk:The Real Phantom Portal/@comment-26348716-20160304072553

I took the time to read it. So glad I did! Amazing story so far. Just a couple of errors:

Chapter 8:

She doges all but one. It completely obliterates the secondary left engine. The Blue  Griffon  begins to spiral down, exactly like it had, over a decade ago...

Chapter 10:

Before ivy could respond, Prancing left the room. Sir followed him into the doorway, and then told Ivy to wait in the room...