Thread:Speedy The Wolf/@comment-26478244-20150730032942

I looked it up, and I dislike it. I have good reason to HATE this. It almost burned my eyes off and broke my glasses.

First, the name of the wiki itself isn't proper. When you expect to have a good wiki, you don't add FACES into the title.

Two, you are very lazy, I see. To have a good story, you don't use the letter "u" for "you." I also see you don't capitalize ANYTHING- everything is lowercase, even the story title.

Three, the whole paragraph is a run-on sentence and isn't considered a paragraph at all. I couldn't even read what was happening. The battle story MADE NO SENSE. I couldn't even make out what was happening.

Four, you cannot spell "copyright" correctly.

What's my rating? 0/10. Complete crap and if there is no improvement, nobody will grow interested in this. You should revise the whole story and correct EVERYTHING or write it all over again. 