Talk:Fman122 i was fman122/@comment-29963882-20170901212047

Tips:

1. Try to make it not too short, but not too long as well.

Making it very short, like that, will not attract much users for a long time, so try to make it longer.

2. Grammar

Please remember wretchedjungle has a w and try to make your i's capital. Like, this is about kindergarten level, you should already know this.

3. Clichè


 * slow clapping*

this story was not just short and has grammar problems but cliche as well.

I would list more, but I don't want to offend you so I'm not making any more tips.