User blog comment:BirbBoi/Fman122's Breakfast/@comment-26863232-20180831152036

Hello! That was a very nice (but kinda scary) story. I like how there was lots of detail, but not too much to be distracting.

I do have a few criticisms, but only if you want to know them. Also, instead of putting your story in a blogpost, you should create a page for it.

All in all,

AAUUUGHHH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!