Talk:New Bows Feature/@comment-26418554-20150520190526

This creepy-pasta, along with the others, isn't that well-written. It's way too short, the plot is under-developed, and it's just.. cheesy. Too many cliché elements add up to a bad story. I know you may be a newbie to writing creepy-pastas, but the humor overrides the fear factor in this piece. Plus, the story isn't really that graphic, [small mentions of gore] so I'm not sure why it would need an 'Explicit' tag.

I'm sorry, but.. 3 / 10.

[I am entitled to my own opinion, and nothing can change that. Disagree with me? Come back with a valid argument, then let's talk.]

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