Talk:Moirai/@comment-39615662-20190810001237

I like how the story is beginning. I can tell that if you were to add a lot more, this story could be pretty awesome. It's probably the kind of story in which I read the first sentence and I can't stop reading.

I'm excited to see where this could potentially go, it seems pretty cool and interesting. I understand that its a WIP, but I think you need to add a ton more before you can call it the beginnings of a story.