Talk:Desire/@comment-32365152-20181122044521

Woah, this is amazing! I like how unsetting and abrupt the staler comes up, catches you off guard. I also like how the person in the story is helpless to help their friend, makes it more scary. I did wish it connected a little more to Animal Jam, however, and the stalker thing is VERY abrupt. Maybe a little foreshadowing in the story part?